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Masked (Free verse) by savannah

Take your mask off, It don't faze me any more, Your bullshit dont mean shit to me I know your fake now Only my best friends are real, The rest of you are backstabbing bastard. If you were real you'd stab me in the front, So I could see you But instead you go walking around, Saying who knows what, While I sit hear thinking you're true, But your only true to your lies. So I'm looking past your mask, And I see the real you, I finally see how fake you are. But it doesn't matter to me anymore. You dont mean anything to me anymore. So take off your mask so you don't fool anyone else Like you fooled me!

Sapphire2589 20-Mar-04/12:19 AM
dont like the cussing,there are spelling errors but it has a good idea behind it and im guess that you just wrote this when you were made,it was just a vent poem.




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