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Love actually (Free verse) by kawakurdi

Love Actually Inspired by the film Love Actually Even a child knows the agony of love And this powerful flow of dream from the depths of the heart The gift of God, the nourishment of nature, The fun which everyone, fools and Platos, flourish in Love is shy at first, unsure, insecure, humble, hesitant But slowly and steadily, surely it will succeed in the end True love will triumph. And everything else will retreat We need each other, more than money, power and glory For none of these can substitute the sensation of love, At first sight, on hearing the voice for the first time, Or when it grows through a boring journey. Happiest times are your presence Saddest moments when you leave Kasia, let me hold your hand So that the stream of blood in my veins Would convey the message of my heart to you: Yes, yes, yes I love you.

zodiac 11-Mar-04/4:08 AM
I'm thinking of writing a poem inspired by this poem, which is decent (actually). Do you think it would be okay if I called it "Love Actually
- Inspired by the poem Love Actually
- Inspired by the film Love Actually"?
Thanks for your advice.




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