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where to go (Free verse) by AskittlesK

Purple Sky hazey sun not sure which way to go follow the darkness, Maybe the dark I always love a challenge. Maybe the sun, save myself from depression. The dark is always sucking you deeper even just thinking about it it drives you mad. I'm being sucked under. Deeper and deeper I go screaming carries everywhere. To the point that I am suffocating and then I'm not there.

Shuushin 2-Mar-04/6:06 PM
Immediately turned off by seein "Purple" and "hazey" together - but I'll keep reading...

hmmm. I like the last two lines - but I still don't know what it was about.




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