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Crash & burn (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey

Whenever you would call me, I'd be there But now that I need you, you don't care. I'm a stranger in your world, with no place to turn, I wasted my tears, then crashed and burn I can't love you anymore, I fell to fast You dropped me when I needed you and put me in your past. Thousand angels dance around me to protect me from the pain. I could have been your angel, you could have been my all, I needed you to catch me, but you just let me fall.

Blindpoetry 21-Feb-04/4:52 PM
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Do you use those big words in a matter of seconds as if saying the word "the"? ..or do you sit there for a few minutes, thinking up of catchy words and phrases just to prove that you graduated college and that you were a geeky kid that would rather read the dictionary than hang with your buds on Saturday nights? ... - of course, you would of liked to imagine that - being as you didn't have any buds. -_-;




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