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Crash & burn (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey

Whenever you would call me, I'd be there But now that I need you, you don't care. I'm a stranger in your world, with no place to turn, I wasted my tears, then crashed and burn I can't love you anymore, I fell to fast You dropped me when I needed you and put me in your past. Thousand angels dance around me to protect me from the pain. I could have been your angel, you could have been my all, I needed you to catch me, but you just let me fall.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Feb-04/11:03 AM
This is a disastrous poeme. It fails utterly. You fail. -10-




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