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The musician (Free verse) by richa

The sun has been harnessed here in the subway another yellow from fire sharp only as smoke the tunes of acoustic guitar and flute take shifts like those of blue and great tits and coins are tossed to fill the brim of a flat hat.

plinkyponk 13-Feb-04/3:36 PM
nice write




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