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Last Chance (Ode) by Butterflywriter

Why did you love me? Why did you care? Why did you bother, Or even dare? None of your friends really liked me, But you didn’t worry. You had me in your heart, And with every beat our love got stronger, But no longer. You said goodbye, And I sure did cry. But its over now, time to move on, In my heart you will never be gone. I’ll always love you, But what am I to do, When my feelings for you are Of no concern to your heart or soul. However, I sometimes wonder, If you ever ponder About taking me back, For that one last chance, That one last dance? You left me, because I broke you heart, But I promise this time I won’t depart, I’ll try if you do, We can work this through, I’ll try, will you?

jasondingus 13-Feb-04/3:23 AM
Excellent Poem!




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