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Sweet Goodbye (Free verse) by ashley

This is my sweet goodbye to you, for all the amazing things you do. For the crazy in love way I feel, and always knowing this love is real. This is my sweet goodbye to you, remembering your touch your kiss and your smile. How could I ever forget your laidback style? This is my sweet goodbye to you, miles away we'll be apart, but you'll always have a special place in my heart. This is my sweet goodbye to you, missing you in every way, because I knew I eventually have to face this day. Face the day you start your life anew, still loving you always, my lover, my friend, my boo.

richa 12-Feb-04/8:24 AM
Too many pop cliches

- to you... you do
- crazy in love -
- love is real -
- laidback style - so naff it would appear in a blue song.




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