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endless eternity: (Free verse) by Sapphire

waves crash a steady beat pounding shores in rhyme time suckles of mother natures teat all the while man remains blind the shifting sands run through a slick channel lost souls still wander the ages a taste rolls in mouths of unwary - banal yet they never see they are within cages

anonymous 4-Apr-02/1:13 PM
the cage and the wide ocean don't work as contrasting forces. Cage/field pond/ocean




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