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How could I ask for anything more? (Free verse) by DirtyKurtsGurl

What I would give to be by his side To lose myself in his eyes There is no price I would not pay To hear his sweet voice say... Feel his hand touch my face All that I own, I would gladly sacrifice If it mean I coud hold him Just once in my life Not money, riches nor fame Are enough to to persuade me To put out this flame For he has captured my heart Put his mark on my soul I am hopelessly lost when we are apart For one taste of his sweet tender lips I would move mountains And raise sunken ships For one the smiles that lights up his face I would fight the legions of hell And endure its blazing furnace To hear him whisper in my ear There is no arduous task That I would not dare To place my hand on his chest And feel his heart beating Is my ultimate quest He is everything that I adore My dream come true How could I ask for anything more?

Palzie 13-Aug-02/2:43 PM
I don't get it? If this guy is everything she wants, and apparently they are not together. Here is a no brainer 'go be by his side'




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