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Dare to Dream (Lyric) by Sterling5583

Living in a world of fantasy Living where you can manipulate reality Baby come, baby come, baby come get me Dare to dream... This is a world where all your skill Depends all upon your power of will You can imagine and create any kind of thrill Dare to dream... Surrounding you is a world where all and nothing is real An illusion you can see, hear, taste, smell, love, feel Find me in this world and then we'll Dare to dream... I'm where reality is blurred; the laws of physics are broken Everything here's done with words unspoken I can fulfil the dreams of all those human Dare to dream...

Redfin 12-Aug-02/9:52 PM
Huuummm different but I think you got your point across, you may need to give it to the person you were writing about.




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