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What else can a young mother say? I wake up at night hearing you... And I love and miss you Emily Mae. "Minutes turn hours & the hours to days" As no one, but you, can take my hand What else can a young mother say? When we put you to ground, the display alone sent me into this no man's land I love and miss you dear Emily Mae. "I buried my heart with, to keep you at play" in that field where the grey stones stand, What else can a young mother say. To those that we had, but went away? I want you to know, "I'm glad you weren't planned." And I love and I miss you Emily Mae. One day soon, with you too, I will stay by your grave as a mother, and friend. What else can a young mother say... But I love and miss you my Emily Mae.

Bachus

5-Feb-04/1:09 AM

Let me get this straight? You said all of that to pee on your own shoe? How have I attempted to destroy you? By commenting on your comments on my 'poetry'? You don't see me over on your home page do you? Reading your wonderful collection of East Coast drivel about love and leaves and new age sewing techniques. Exactly, do you always think people are that stupid, I mean to believe that I'm REvil and out to get you? It's really rather simple, if you don't like me poetry, you don't have to read it, I have enough housewives finger banging their poodles across America to add to the list. Or do you just keep that special motavational tool for yourself (claiming 'they' are out to get me? You are over here dumbass, not vice versa. That's right, you don't see me commenting on your poetry do you, I think if I wanted to 'destroy your poetry' I'd probably start there and leave comments on them like this sucks, lets burn it, boo, 0 etc.

Now, I can see how you might feel left out, because you're the only one I haven't done that too out of hundreds, but like I said earlier, I'm busy, perhaps you can find someone with more free time on their hands that would be interested in destroying your poetry, or listening do your delightful melodramas about counseling, and designer shoes, and urine, and what have you, I will merely repeat what I said earlier, I responded to a comment that you left on my poem, I really don't see how that has anything to do with your poetry, or you, or your shoes, or your vagina. Nonetheless, if anyone should have pissy shoes, it should be you. Thank you, I'm here all day folks.

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