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Butterflies (Free verse) by eviltwin

Stepping from the shadows Of a dark forest Into a sun-buttered glade. Short step Butterflies take flight In a storm of a thousand whispers Face lifted to the glow Stand still as world revolves Caught in a spun-light web.

<~> 12-Aug-02/6:48 PM
'storm of a thousand whispers' 'spun light web' 'sun-buttered' i am sated. thank you.




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