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Winter (Haiku) by morffrom

Winter comes early A butterfly is frozen A tear in heaven

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Feb-04/2:23 PM
I recommend the following changes:

"Winter" -> "Winturd"
"tear" -> "smear"

Thanks.




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