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Something Strong (Free verse) by Kriss

When you think I'm not there, I am when you think I dont care I do, Theres nothing else in this world that compares to the way I love my boo! I may sometimes make mistakes I regret them more then once I hope were together forever a lot more then a couple months. The way I look at you when you stare into my eyes it's like our relationship is perfect all love and truth but never lies. I like you a lot I love you tons I am here for you no matter what we have just gone through a little rut. It was like love at first sight but not really it is like we know we are meant to be i hope our love is strong enough to not let anything come between you and me.

pete 12-Aug-02/1:55 PM
i dunno where p&k it gets off rubbishing your work ; just read the juvenile garbage he ( i assume ) writes . BUT imho it's not very good. Zinnai66 said it all ... keep on keeping on




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