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aggression (Free verse) by ThePariahDog

i'll construct a tether made of leather that'll bind you to me for eternity this link is not worn never will it be torn for it'll have began on your divan with tool in hand i hereby demand your obedience in the form of acquiescence tied down you're mine now constrained by silk sashes you'll receive your lashes there's no escape from my hate

zodiac 2-Feb-04/8:54 PM
"divan IS a rather difficult word to rhyme" - no, 'rather' is a rather difficult word to rhyme, going only with blather, gather, lather, Willa Cather, and slather. Difficult, ironically, is even more difficult. You could possibly rhyme it with 'terrific cult' or 'horrific dolt' - but you'd likely be called pretentious and stubborn by most of your peers.




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