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knocked down to look up (Free verse) by singinkygal

Does he say to the angels well look who it is She must be hurtin yes she's cryin I can see her pain Yes I'm certain that she's tryin to reach me again because she only calls on me when she's down she only calls on me when she's down Up on that mountain she was closer than now I listened for my name but I didn't hear a sound because she only calls on me when she's down oh only when she's down Yes it's me Lord, I'm in need lord my burdens have me bound I know we haven't talked in a while guess I knew you would be around I'm sorry I only call on you when I'm down Oh I've only called on you when I'm down

singinkygal 17-Jan-04/2:34 PM
hahaha oh so funny. YOu missed your calling!! A poet with a sense of humor oh well at least you have a sense of humor you can't have it all.




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