god'swife15 Jan 2004

Brilliance. How excellent to see it. After so long in the swamp, finally a bit of art.

'It was a bad near miss'

and from then on the poem takes hold of me, lovers trying to save a small life together, naked. their hearts just as frail, and their present life snared together. I love this poem. You have a harsh, poignant talent. My favorite.