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Watching (Free verse) by DMonster

Rain is pounding pounding down Wind that howls rattles windows Someone walks in the middle of the street Hood up, knife in hand She runs the blade across her wrist Blood spills staning the ground She passes out no longer feeling Blood is draining they aren't fast enough She is dying in the street People stand by merly watching Noone says a thing She is dead now, too late

DMonster 14-Jan-04/5:20 PM
thanks for the 7, Its supposed to b "depressing" thats y I write it, most of my poems are written when I'm angry or sumtin, no I don't have prozac, I don't even take meds for depression, I think I should but my mom won't take me to the doc




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