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Cherry Blossoms (anti-haiku) (Free verse) by middenHeap

In the time of the cherry blossoms, without warning The sky turns leaden and opens Slurries of western words, driven like snow Swirl through the sullen petals Turning the careful fractal economy of beauty Into sodden masses of pink, run through with Carbon from the exhausts of a million cars. Neon glints in the wet bark, black Beetles scrabble furiously to avoid drowning. A ragged asiatic man reels in the road and ends sitting With a thud against a cherry trunk Blooded by obfuscation. He splays his fingers on the ice-wet asphalt, Palms sliding in the flower flesh Considers speaking, weighing every word A sacrifice against the precision of thought. Instead he is silent, each sweet sentence Receding away unspoken like the long rows Of precisely-planted trees, The fuel of reverie.

little_big_nose 11-Jan-04/7:02 PM
HOLY (and I use the term loosly) FUCK! you called me an anti-christ!!!!! I know I'm not Marilyn Manson, but I'm geting there. I must thank you for the ego-boost of the week. And whats great is I can spew words and write better poetry than you. I'd love to stay and laugh at the words you write but don't understand, but I gotta go cut myself, sing to Satan, and think nasty, unclean thoughts of how I will torture your soul when it gets sent to me in the Underworld

- "Well I'm not a slave, to a god, that doesn't exist
Marilyn Manson, the Godfather of Goth "the fight song"





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