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Judge Me Not (Free verse) by jasondingus

People, people cant you see, What I do with my life, Has only to do with me, Who are you,to pass judgement on, If your so perfect,cast the first stone, People, people,cant you see, That your word's,have no affect on me, From your lips,criticism is spoken, Maybe because your,hypocritical heart is broken, People,people,can't you see, That you're the ones,full of insecurity, How could you,so inhumane be, With your thoughtless words,of impurities, People, people I say this to you, Not everyone has,your point of view, So open your eyes, before your speak, Look inside yourself,for someone to critique!

singinkygal 9-Jan-04/7:17 PM
Wonderful, good points




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