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Where was god? (Free verse) by little_big_nose

Where was god when she had to die? Where was god when she had to get high? Where was god when my cousins had to go away? And why isn't god there for anyone who is gay? Where was god on nine/ eleven? Was he just chillin' in Heaven? Will god ever be there When I really need someone to care? Or will god just run Just like he has always done? Why was it gods will To have him swallow all those pills? Allah, Buddha, Christ, it doesn't matter who They will always leave you in the blue Where was god when people died for him in 'holy wars'? What does god care, he can always make more Where was god through all my pain? Why was all my praying in vain? Where is god now that I have the knife? It doesn't matter now, I've taken my life

Everyone 3-Jan-04/8:56 AM
It may be that the author is a quadro-dunce. Indeed, their post on your poeme would suggest just that. I thought the author was trying to get Christians to ask themselves those questions, viz. "will God ever be there?" etc, so that they might come to the conclusion that their God doesn't exist or something. I think the only way to resolve this dispute is to ask the author whether or not they are angry with a non-existent God. It's a standpoint I can quite understand; I myself am extremely angry with the non-existent hammer that is currently bludgeoning my non-existent pet otter to an imaginary bloody pulp.




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