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Regrets, No More (Lyric) by writteninskin

set to spin infinitely a world of past and future mysteries. wrapped up tears of sorrow, wilting as my life is just beginning. no more does distraction kill me as I search for love, descending deeper into sinful dreamings: regrets, no more, i have within me. when one time i was forgiving all my error, misbehaving; a child in despair and needing love to keep me from deceasing. but no longer do i need to be given pain with great deceiving. now i know of true love's healing. now i know that they deceived me. now i know the truth in hiding. love is not meant for decieving. love is not a sinful dreaming. i have known love from decievers but true love's meant for true believers. no more does distraction turn me. no more is the world of mysteries set to spin infinitely.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 6-Aug-02/11:06 PM
In particular, "no more does distraction kill me/as I search for love, descending/deeper into sinful dreamings" can easily be read both ways, especially combined with "I have known love from deceivers/but true love's meant for true believers", and your defense of the needy feeling.




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