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Rustling Wind (Lyric) by laura2224rn

Listen carefully to the quiet rustling wind for there is a message that God will send As thoughts are racing through your mind with the silent messages you will find The answer to all our worldly grief's lay hidden beneath those rustling leaves When we believe we are all standing alone listen sincerely for the answer is shown We are as children waiting, in despair without abilities, so unaware For the answers lay within our own being with the promise that God is overseeing God's rustling wind, leads to a promised land just look beside you, and there he will stand Laura Brewer

The_Third_Isis 9-Dec-03/11:05 PM
you get a 9. for the elegance as oposed to hobos in 8t's hood. The contrast is finese, style and grace.
It's 2 a.m. and I'm of to dream with that vision in your poem thank you.A promice we all forget about at times.




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