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Poppy,diamond,s and twoo coward's (Free verse) by The_Third_Isis

I once knew a man let's call him "Bill" he was pathetic a coward and way beyond ill. He more than trice tryed to kill he's wife and unborn child. no wonder she wished mercury or pan anything but lucifer be the unborn's father. almost a "Lacie" casualty + r.i.p. Because of paranoia,insecurity, and he's 3" dickie. Premature ejaculation is he's crown. It's surprising he got a new generation. Weak,adictive,deceiving,thiefing,HYENA like will. Thirty years go by and it's a huge surprice. the replica of bill except he's mother's eyes. That forked tounge and cowardly lion way's. That make him act unhappy but GAY. He fucked he's mother in more than one way. Then he tell's he's moronic abortion clinic Angel's-here's three hundred $ hon cuz you're the only one...whaaa..whaaa. Whyle smiling he's damiens best. stagnant cumm runs all the way to the bow- of he's legs. Just like he's father as i look- he's way only thing diferent is he's manly lenght. But after eight minutes or so he too is spent. They call themselve's GOD'S but that's a fasade. You are a turk my captain kirk,it's a fact admit it. So beam yourself up whatever turks do. And stop chasing your loved ones. Your nostrils all blue. With threats that you spew sending them running like deer not from fear but from YOU!. News flash your being left flat like your good ol dad. Don't blame them later for the pus in your eye's. Your pop's balding head and your terrible dreams. The screams that you hear will come from your throat.. your daddy you'll see dressed in a whores pettycoat- whyle dead denise is laughing about the aids yeast she so lovingly gave you, when you packed her's- now it's in your ass.Some sour cherries huh?. You wished what you had done had NEVER come to PASS. OOOFFFFF with he's head shout's the queen of sword's NOOOOOO he is still our's pleads the queen of heart's YOUUUUU are NOT like ME, points the queen of diamond's Throwing a poppy landing on he's chest, I'am your mother pretend it's my breast suck on it son.,I was your queen your love, your finest guest I was the best..too late Put your disgusting exsistance to a final rest. This is fiction except for the cicle of abuse passsed on and on till everyone is gone. Dedicated to Lacie and Connor R.I.P *To all the sick battering husband,s boyfriend's & men who hate themselve's and the women who love them !

dragonfly 9-Dec-03/3:18 PM
*is speechless*




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