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Cut (Free verse) by TheVampireLeStan

The pressure builds, So I cut. Negative feelings overwhelming me, So I cut. Stress adds up, So I cut. Good for nothing, So I cut. Need to relieve this burden, So I cut. Better off dead, So I cut. A little too deep this time, I cut. My blood is everywhere, Because I cut. This isn't what I want, But I cut. Dead...Because I cut.

Samantha 25-Nov-03/4:46 PM
wow. that was really good. i liked it alot.




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