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Trollop: A Married Mans Revenge (Free verse) by DreamerSupreme

[Horus, this is dedicated to you.] I love to kill. Thats what I think to myself as I thrust my knife deep into your skin, making you weep, while you plead for me to stop, knowing I won't. Ripping you apart slowly, I bathe in your blood, anointing myself, smiling showing my razor incisors. I threw your remains to the wall like a rag doll, and sat down, my skin painted a deep red, staring at your body. You were so beautifull when you were alive. Now you are a Picasso image adored by me, while my eyes admire your torn form. You look better dead.

The_Third_Isis 24-Nov-03/6:23 PM
Knife (phalic?) deep into your..(froidian) weep. slowly bathe in your blood.
Annointing "myself" smiling showing my incisors. deep(again? hmmm) red your body.You are an image adored/admired by me.What passion! Je te adore..Thanx by the way for your poetic genetic remark on "sirius" make over. I am lucky to have suns who are talented Good looking 10+.Poetic/art/music/acting.
Si vu ..please ,overlook my misspells. Ciao bello!




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