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Small made Large (Free verse) by tadpole

Hydrogen Ions piling up The amount of blood wouldn't even fill a cup Still, I feel the tissues tear, its almost too much Masocistic? Well, I don't know Addicted like kids with Nintendo Somehow I got hooked and wouldn't let go No Superman here, heck I'm not even a Clark On mountains, by rivers, or through some park Give me rain, sleet, or snow, I'll only want more For some odd reason this pain hits the spot Legs turning and burning like some crazy robot Running my life right into the ground If only I could capture this passion And direct it towards a more important action Living life instead of just getting by

tadpole 2-Nov-03/2:02 PM
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