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Not who You thought I was (Free verse) by Katzclear

Today ya might find something out, A lil' somethin bout me Shut your mouth and listen up Quit bein blind and see Ya think that you can keep me here If i never find you out Ya think that I ain't been listnin Well I know all about The things that you been sayin bout me Behind those closed locked doors Well I'm through with puttin up with you I Ain't takin any more! I ain't who you thought I was, I aint your sideline amusement When all your so-called friends are gone I ain't gon' be left for choosin I aint just here to help you out, See I got problems too And to be quite honest Honey, my biggest problems You. When you and I were all alone 'N we saw eye to eye You were all I'd ever ask for baby, better than money'd buy. But now I see it's all an act, 'cause when others are around, You make poor jokes on my account, and always puttin me down. Well I aint here for your sideline amusement I aint who you thought I was I aint here for you to push around, Like everyone always does. It's time for me to settle this score; you think I'm already losin' But baby you'd better watch your back, This time I ain't here for usin! Don't dare go tellin me you're sorry; Excuses for abusin, I ain't listnin anymore hun, Your lies are not amusing. I'm starting over Just let go Ain't no way you're gettin back in; You think you know me oh-so-well.. but baby I will win. Your tricks are over Your triumphs lost There ain't no use keepin' goin. All those years my wasted tears kept my anger overflowin. May anger gave me power and the courage that I lacked; Don't mess with me now baby cause there ain't no holdin back! Because Honey.... You don't know me. Not the one you thought you knew. But don't go callin me the liar. The one at fault... is you.

bratsy 1-Nov-03/1:22 PM
Hey! you are absolutley correct :) ~*~




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