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Through Poetry (Free verse) by newdawnfades

Through poetry reflections of your spirit shine like little crystal shards tracing the sky in their path Like a child absently drawing in no particular direction content to find a path with fingers, hands, emotions, joy, sadness. Let no wall block, let no chains bind the creative self for that is the true and only self that matters.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 29-Oct-03/11:34 AM
Don't thank me; think me. What I mean to say is that you have given us a great poeme with a great message - I'm the one who should be thanking you! Just keep thinking and keep writing. That's thanks enough for me. I have to say that I too have suffered the strains of the waves of hustle and bustle breaking on my shores. It wasn't until I thought deeply about the problem and about my life that things improved. Waves form in areas of conflict; whether it's a conflict between land and sea, or a conflict of interest within our day to day lives makes no difference. They will both cause ripples in the natural harmony of life. I eventually decided to stop trying to be too many things at once - essentially, I got rid of the shoreline altogether! The waves of hustle and bustle no longer bring me strife because my entire realm is an ocean of serenity. Gone are the days of turbulent discourse between earth and water. And gone are the days of a frantic and unproductive lifestyle. Have you had similar experiences in your own life?




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