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The Right to Life (Haiku) by Retaliate

thirty-nine million completely without healthcare the right to life: no one Florida veg consuming the media the right to life: yes trick the middle class diverting their attention from real issues Enjoin their passion disengage their reasoning you deceptive fucks and yet they still vote for you the pretend pious they bewildered herd

richa 28-Oct-03/7:15 AM
Good, like the flow of the haikus.

They are haiku in spirit as well as syllable.

The argument in the last three verses loses discipline though.

None of those would stand up as a single haiku.




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