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Night On the Town (Haiku) by razorgrin

Wheat Beer gon with summer. Now, dark Harvest Ale. Beer that eats like a meal. Watch Foosball, sip drinks Both grinning like Cheshire Cats whisper conspiracies. Limonade and I share White Russian, two straws like 50's malt shop kids.

ecargo 17-Oct-03/9:29 AM
I like the last tercet best. Nice image you build here.

Syllable counts aside, this is haiku, though you'll get the "this isn't 5-7-5" naysayers anyway. (Anyway, many poets write haikus that don't strictly conform to 5-7-5--there is much more to a haiku than the number of its syllables.)




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