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sit place (Free verse) by kingit

I sit behind my face in a forgotten little, dark room in the back of my head peering out where slivers of light fly in jabbing, stabbing reflecting cadaver red empathy rains down hot tears on the inside numb concrete outside split brain behind shit face & ball-point penis.

richa 14-Oct-03/7:27 AM
some nice lines, if thats what they are.

the layout doesn't seem to add to the poem, I think it detracts




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