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the meeting (Free verse) by richa

The bottleneck of a hollowed out birch stump; wind blows over a gentle key, meeting at E, somewhere in the arpeggios of a mind, the pursed lips of a girl piping on the pagoda steps of an embankment. Alone.

richa 6-Oct-03/10:38 AM
trying to get a feeling of physical distance with the last line.




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