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Was/Were You? (Concrete) by Alyssa91

Was I just meant to die? Was I put here to cry? For the way my life is treated I am never undefeated. So, Was I drugged up everyday? Was I hooked up with Mr.Ray? Well my life is never decided upon my actions Or maybe they decdided in tiny fractions What we'll never know is whats inside if your always in a hide. So, Really! were you just meant to die? Or were you put here to cry?

hipster flare 1-Oct-03/9:56 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.

Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.


This is a dumb poem. Sorry.




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