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the meeting
(
Free verse
) by
richa
The bottleneck of a hollowed out birch stump; wind blows over a gentle key, meeting at E, somewhere in the arpeggios of a mind, the pursed lips of a girl piping on the pagoda steps of an embankment. Alone.
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30-Sep-03/8:28 PM
Something tells me this is just right. yes, yes. Somehow I get this and it works. Excellent.
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