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:) (Free verse) by Moniquesuvee

I once met a guy named Dave Who I couldn't help but crave The feelings he set in me stirring (If I were a cat, I'd be purring) In the Stone Age, I'd crawl to your cave and beg you to take me as slave A wink was all that you gave It swept over me like a wave The tingling I felt down my spine Told me you had to be mine.

LuckyJoe 8-Sep-03/8:00 AM
I'm thinking you needed to get away from the “ave” its meant for cruising. This poem... well its a bruising on the eyes. I can rhyme. Look I’m a poet and didn’t know it maybe I should publish a book.

Yes my comment is as bad as the poem. *does a little dance*




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