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:) (Free verse) by Moniquesuvee

I once met a guy named Dave Who I couldn't help but crave The feelings he set in me stirring (If I were a cat, I'd be purring) In the Stone Age, I'd crawl to your cave and beg you to take me as slave A wink was all that you gave It swept over me like a wave The tingling I felt down my spine Told me you had to be mine.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7-Sep-03/2:36 PM
Congratulations. From the appalling title to the laughable use of "purring" to rhyme with "stirring", this has to be one of the worst poemes I have ever read.




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