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A Poem For World Peace. (Free verse) by GAY AS FU*K

Dear Tony Blair, Are you even there? Do you care? Thousands of Ethiopians are dying, So don't send them words send them rice, I hate to see them crying, Its just not very nice. Dear Mr Bush, Will you stop talking mush? Your promises need a push. H.I.V is like wildfire in Africa, At least Clinton was a nice man, And thats why they laugh at ya. Its time you stopped opening the can of whoop ass, And opened the can of food, Its time you saw from their looking glass, And then you would see you are rude. Dear Osama, Why such the drama? Moslems are not always right, We want to make peace not fight, Why can't you see you're not right? Jesus is the true light. It shouldn't matter if your gay or straight, I just want the worlds leaders to unite and be mates. If we don't then we'll all soon be dead, I want you to listen to what Whitney said. I believe that children are our future, lead them well and let them lead the way, Show them all the beauty they posess inside, Give them a sense of pride, To make it easier, Let the childrens laughter, Remind us how we used to be.

J.B. Manning 4-Sep-03/4:32 PM
How old are you? If you're like 12, this is a great poem. Good thoughts and I agree with your motivation for writing it, but it's painful. right fight right fight right fight right fight.




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