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Broken (Lyric) by Irischer Junge

I'm hurt, I'm broken. Why did this Have to happen? I'm alone, I'm crying, But I know That I'm not yet dying. Though I've lost My only love, I've not lost My God above. He is still Love and divinity. I've still got The Holy Trinity.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 1-Sep-03/4:58 PM
It certainly is an ace poeme. I really like the use of "dying" to rhyme with "crying"! But hey I have a question about Christ.

If lots of people pray for something, is Jesu more likely to answer the prayer than if only one person prays?

Thanks!




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