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Naughty Word Game (Free verse) by kthay

Have you played the naughty word game, It really is great fun You say a word that’s really rude, like bottom, pants or bum! It makes you laugh when you feel sad, or if you’re bored of telly You say a word like wee or poo, or maybe snot or belly! My favourite word is knickers, it really is the best My best friend is a bit weird though, cos his favourite word is vest! Mum told us off yesterday, when we played the game in the car Maybe because I shouted aloud, boobies, bogie and bra! I think next time we play this game, it won’t be near my Mum So we can shout at the top of voice, knickers, vest and bum!!!!!!!!

Don-Quixote 28-Aug-03/2:59 PM
.. if your goal was to capture the mental workings of children, then ok, im not going to step on this.. because you did it well.. the cute innocence and crap..
but cmon, couldnt you insert a "goddamn it" or "shit".. ok, ok, im being picky.. -sigh-

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