poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Lizzie Boredom by Bonehiss.

Bonehiss24 Aug 2003

The first draft process for me ends when I think I have spewed out enough raw material so that it hangs together all the way through from a conceptual and structural standpoint which rarely happens without a little bit of polishing here and there. In this case I spent a little bit more revising the material from
"Instead, I greased my pants" to "Who had just flown in from LA the night before' Thanks for devilled.