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To Mom (Free verse) by Brittanyy

I call you all day but you dont answer the phone, Why is this happening? I feel so alone. You pick up the bottle and take another drink, And a few minutes later you go puke in the sink. You're killing your body You're killing your Mind You cant handle the truth so you drink yourself blind. Throughout the years you've caused me so much pain, Somebody help me Im going insane. I Pick up the knife and walk up the stairs, why shouldn't I do this? Nobody Cares. I sit on the bed and take a deep breath, raise the knife above my head and stab myself in the chest...

SupremeDreamer 23-Aug-03/12:02 AM
try it? i lived it, and maybe you should read horus's Gordian Knot.. trust me girlie, just because shit happens in life doesnt mean you should whimper and cry about it.. check out Maman: Psychic Tophet.. i didnt cry about it, i fixed it.

Do the topic justice damn it.. atleast try to improve your ability to write if your going to write in self pity.




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