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stupid (Free verse) by mogwai

I'm wearing a t-shirt that reads 'I'm with stupid' I think that's pretty funny then i realise I'm alone damn that's pretty stupid

markb 25-Jul-02/10:43 PM
a bit too cutesy by itself. Perhaps it would work better in context of a larger work.




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