nentwined16 Mar 2002

I'm not sure if it's the poem or the fact that I just woke up, but I've tried to read it through three times and I keep skipping down. It's definitely not holding my attention. I think a part of that is I really don't get what you're getting at -- I feel I could if I studied the poem, but the poem doesn't invite such -- mayeb a little more cohesion or a bit more bluntness or something would help