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How many (Free verse) by hamgurl

How many times can we be together How many times can this not work out How many times can we argue And forget what its even about How many times can I love you And hate you all at the same time How many times can I talk to someone esle And have you still in my mind How many times can somebody tell me How I should always be with you How many times will people tell me That go back with you is what I should do How many times can I start to like someone esle Only to have you come around again How many times can we still like each other And still call each other just friends? How many times can times I ask Because right now I really don't know. I don't want to be with you But still i don't want you to go How many times can I feel one one minute And another in a few How can it take for us not to be together To have you say I love you? How many times can I talk to someone esle And just want to be in someone's arms And then to have you say something That makes me really wonder Is the 3rd time always the charm.

lucky_cmc 25-Jul-02/6:40 PM
That was a really good poem. Had so much feeling in it.
Keep up the good work




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