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(The vinyards of Tuscany) (Free verse) by Patsy

Little whinging crucifixes who barbed you there? former fascists fastened to the wire, victims of a grape fire carcasses upsidedown nudging the sky like it was ground i can already taste what i hate.

richa 12-Aug-03/8:45 AM
Not sure why the title is parenthesized is it because it is somehow incedental.

I like the lively use of language
'victims of a grape' sounds out of place though




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