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Portsmouth belle 3 (Free verse) by Garrett S Sexton

O flat chested Annie, she lit up the streets, after the taverns had closed Tall and lean, like the bean but with a rum-red rosy nose O flat chested Annie, she'd take anybody's money and your honey she would be Her favours, though not cheap could not be beat, and to reap the benefits you sow O flat chested Annie, her arse was her fanny and her cock for you always stood proud O flat chested Annie, worked for her money and always worked best amongst a crowd

INTRANSIT 8-Aug-03/4:21 PM
S-4 obviously. and the last line can lose (amongst) and simplify and still be ok.




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