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letting off angry emotions (Lyric) by LosT SykoPath

I hate the way you look at me I hate that you know what you want to be 'cause I'm so fuckin lost I take in all of your tourment making my heart hard like cemente now I fucking just give up I want a way for you to forever shut up You've pushed me to my very last nerve Your bloody heart on a plate is what's going to be served I feel like ripping your heart out through your throt, and around you make a bloody mote For it is oyu who causes me pain So now it's my turn to make your blood rain When im done with you I'll grab my gun This is were it all gets fun I'll cock it back and put the barrle to my temple I'll shoot the bullet through my brain, nice and simple As the blood splatters out onto the wall I gag and then my body falls Falling quickly to the ground I hope to never be found The feeling of being the worst in the pack Suddenly..everything goes black

Lifeboatman 6-Aug-03/8:44 PM
nice tension... 9




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