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Snake Oil: A Deadication (Limerick) by OneFingerAnswer

New style of therapy Using bullet psychology If you can't find a cure This one works for sure Just a 22 caliber lobotomy

richa 31-Jul-03/6:56 AM
structure and flow is terrible, I can hardly read it.

Shame because I quite like the content.




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